“An abstract short story that leaves the reader hanging.”
This was a good solid read of a poignant issue, with an excellent twist on where I thought the story was going. At times however, it felt like I was reading a set of unconnected extracts.
There wasn’t enough background on the couple’s loss, which would have made me sympathize more with their situation. As it was, the story seemed to be just a sketch of a couple whose lives had been touched by tragedy, who eventually find a way to resolve it.
A better connection of the plot between the scene breaks would have made this a really good tale.